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 Only Your path observing,
 Your contemplation taking,
-I know not how much lifetime,
+I know not how much lifetime
-Cleaving, has gone of mine.
+Cleaving has gone of mine.
 I remember just Your way;
 I count only hopeful days.
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 Happiness-and-sorrow's rite.
-You merely smile from afar,
+You simply smile from afar,
 But by that grin You rid the dark.
 I know that myself You regard,
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 Close by why don't You come?
 Even the least gap is not borne.
-Having arrived in psyche, speak of love;
+Having appeared in psyche, speak of love;
-Agony's memory setting aside.
+The memory of agony is set aside.
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