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-On the moonlit night along with the moon,
+On a moonlit night with the moon along,
-what for did you come?
+For whose sake had You come?
-in the recess of mind, with mild breeze,
+In a recess of the mind, upon winds sonorous,
-you sang the song secretly.
+Stealthily You came, singing a song.
-i was alone in deep thought,
-and did not observe when the moonlight vanished.
+In the depths of my thought I had been lonely;
-the white clouds sang through golden lines,
+I saw not when gone has the moon of early morning.
-and shine was marked in that night.
+Like a golden streak on white cloud's body,
-thinking about that the mind quivers with pleasure.
+Traced on that gloom the light had become.
-the heaven comes down on this muddy earth.
-getting all the experiences, this impression remains
+Musing on that, with a shiver mind thrills;
-day and night surrounding me.
+Divine realm descends to this dusty earth.
+All sense-perception gets this realization:
+Surrounding me day and night You are.
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