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-O Lord, You are the glittering moon
+You are the sparkling full-moon lamp
-in the dark and cloudy night.
+On a cloudy night.
-You are the polestar
+To those who've lost their way, You are the polestar
-for one lost in the wilderness,
+On a lonely path.
-wandering on a lonely path.
+For all pains, You are the sweet balm,
-You are the sweet balm
+At everyone's side.
-that heals all sorrows.
-You are the glittering moon
+In all actions I seek You.
-in the dark and cloudy night.
+In times of unspoken agony,
-In all my actions I seek You.
+Much as the afflicted pray,
-In my unspoken agony,
+I long for You.
-I long for You,
-like those afflicted.
+You are with me in day and night.
-You are in day
+You are with me in weal and woe.
-and You are in night.
+In all my activities, relieving sorrow, You are
-You are in pleasure,
+With me, with me.
-and You are in pain.
-You make us forget all obstacles on our path.
-You are together with us, together, together.
-O Lord, You are the glittering moon
-in the dark and cloudy night.
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