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 In the depths of my thought I had been lonely;
-I did not see when has gone full moon at morn early.
+When has gone the full moon at early morn, I did not see.
 Like a golden streak on gray cloud's body,
-Traced on that gloom light had become.
+Traced upon that gloom light had become.
 Musing on that, with a shiver mind thrills;